This is intense and compelling. I’m completely hooked, man.
Forgive the tardy reply. End of semester. Up to my knees in portfolios.
I like your choice of putting this extraordinary encounter on a daytime, busy street. The narrator is quite right: the average person is programmed to not register the uncanny, particularly during the day. The day is, ironically, when most of us is dead sleep.
This is intense and compelling. I’m completely hooked, man.
Forgive the tardy reply. End of semester. Up to my knees in portfolios.
I like your choice of putting this extraordinary encounter on a daytime, busy street. The narrator is quite right: the average person is programmed to not register the uncanny, particularly during the day. The day is, ironically, when most of us is dead sleep.
So glad you’re diggin it!